Thread:1011025m/@comment-36595722-20181227195729/@comment-26833105-20181228034339

Let me show you what other things you have done wrong.

Here, in this edit, you capitalized the word "is". It is unnecessary to emphasize that word, it makes it informal as well.

In this one, you added a sentence which again, trying to add an unnecessary point stating the item is useless. You should've given proof why is it useless, not putting a claim without actual elaboration. Capitalizing the word "USELESS" and having exclamation is not needed in articles.

I hope this would help you to improve your wording, and your contribution to our articles.