Thread:Jerricks/@comment-32238230-20180120165950/@comment-5030855-20180120172630

Hmm, looking back at your edit, I don't blame Sonnenly for undoing your edit. Here's why:

http://lumber-tycoon-2.wikia.com/wiki/Rukiryaxe?diff=160778&oldid=158903

The description change wasn't that important of a change. It should've also been N/A, but I'll fix that.

"The Rukiryaxe, also known as the Shark Axe,"

Having "the" in there is unnecessary, people usually call it "Shark Axe" and not "The Shark Axe". Also, you bolded "the" and kept it lower case? It should've only been bolded if you wanted the t to be upper case.

"Its most unique feature is the face located on the blade of its head, which has shark-like teeth on the edge of the axe blade, and devilish red eyes."

This isn't that bad, but we already know it's on the blade because the first part of the sentence already stated that.

"'A player must get all of these required items for the quest:"

tbh, I like the previous edit better. "One must" sounds better than "A player must" in my perspective. Though, this is my opinion. Also, bolding "required" is a nice touch because it shows that you must have the items to spawn the Rukiryaxe.

"with an unknown heavenly music playing"

We know what the music is; it's known.

Overall, I could see why Sonnely undone your edit. Most of the content wasn't needed and or had formatting errors.